Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Dialogue


In this scene a teacher is telling her husband about an argument between two kids at the school she teaches at.
The bully of the school is walking down the hall way with his group of friends. The “new” boy accidentally bumps into the bully.
“Sorry about that. It won’t happen again.”  Said the new kid as he gathered his things.
“It better not happen again or else there is going to be a major problem.” The bully pushed the wimpy "new" kid into the wall.
The frightened kid didn't know what to do “Look would you stop I said I’m sorry and I need to get to class.”
“Hey! You can go to class when I am done with you and not until then!” Said the bully as he pushed him again.
The “new” kid raises his voice and says, “Well we are done.”  And walks away.
“No because I did not say we were done, therefore we aren't done.” Says the bully and then continues to hit the kid.
“Please stop please” Cries the “new” kid.
By this time the bell has rang and the hallways are nearly empty. A student teacher walking down the hallway finds the bully beating the kid. She then pulls off the bully and drags him to the principal’s office. 

1 comment:

  1. I think the repetition of "done" is quite realistic. It seems that normal conversations light upon a shared vocabulary.

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